Writing my autobiography, need feedback.

[Jason]

For me, there have been many twists and turns in this crazy journey we call life, some good and some not so good. At times I have found myself among the upper echelons of high society, at others among the worst dregs of humanity. My journey's purpose is unknown, my final destination a mystery, but I do know this much - its been one helluva ride so far.

That's all I have so far, please let me know what you think.

[Gilly]

Green light!

[erika]

It needs more emoticons.

[Matt]

Whenever possible, you should pose questions to yourself, a la Robert Evans. (a.k.a. Kid Notorious)

[Sarah]

I've read worse.  No, really.  (Sad, ain't it?)

[A.M. Thomas]

I especially like the part about your life.

[Oogie]

I'll do the next paragraph:

I was born a poor rubber miner in the Belgian Congo. My father, like so many other chimney-sweeps, had descended on the Dark Continent during the Rubber Rush of '89, his head bouncing with dreams of the mythical Vulcan Kingdom. What was supposed to be a life of ease turned quickly to horror when he succumbed to the dreaded Latex Fever and was sent to a rubber room. Jervis Mcgillicutty Slackworth would remain there for the rest of his life. His polymer dreams had forever lost their elasticity.

[Chris L]

I'm steeling myself for the tragic "FOT mixtape" chapter.

[bruce]

I'm steeling myself for the tragic "FOT mixtape" chapter.

Just like some of the great ideas of Orson Welles this to has been lost to history.

[samir]

Jason, I'm eager to read the section where you talk about the mean streets of North London.
Habs 4 Life!

[Rainer]

Please write phonetically. I don't speak English.

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Epic!

[Shaggy 2 Grote]

It's a great start, but I'd advise making a few cuts - the middle part goes on a bit long.