Everyone- thanks and I'm glad you guys enjoyed it. This means a lot!
This is in a competition? How do I help it compete?
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How long did it take to put together? Have you worked on anything else?
It was an idea I had in the back of my mind for almost a year before I sat down one day and drafted a script as I needed to turn something in for this sketch show I was working on. We punched it up and two weeks later I had a final draft. We shot it in about five hours over the course of two nights and edited all day and night that friday. It ran in the show two days later.
I haven't worked on much - the sketch show that I am writing for is called Exquisite Corpse and it's a monthly show performed and streamed live over internet and I think this is only show that does that but I could be mistaken. there's more about it here:
http://www.claymoreproductions.com/exquisite/. thanks again, dudes!