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orangewhip

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Critique the T-Shirt I designed.
« on: August 10, 2008, 03:23:57 PM »
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dave from knoxville

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Re: Critique the T-Shirt I designed.
« Reply #1 on: August 10, 2008, 04:06:23 PM »


Dude should be wearing a ratty toupee. Otherwise, it's perfect.

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Re: Critique the T-Shirt I designed.
« Reply #2 on: August 10, 2008, 04:38:31 PM »
It's clip-art from this t-shirt design site, but I love it.
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Re: Critique the T-Shirt I designed.
« Reply #3 on: August 10, 2008, 04:39:06 PM »
I'm not sure the picture matches the crazy intensity of the message.

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Re: Critique the T-Shirt I designed.
« Reply #4 on: August 10, 2008, 04:46:03 PM »
The contrast between the happy boy and the slogan is my favorite part.  It's like when someone thinks they are about to get gomped, and then Tom tells them they aren't, but a few seconds later he does.  That kid is in those few seconds before relief and gomping.
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Re: Critique the T-Shirt I designed.
« Reply #5 on: August 10, 2008, 05:07:20 PM »
The contrast between the happy boy and the slogan is my favorite part.  It's like when someone thinks they are about to get gomped, and then Tom tells them they aren't, but a few seconds later he does.  That kid is in those few seconds before relief and gomping.

You've converted me.

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Re: Critique the T-Shirt I designed.
« Reply #6 on: August 10, 2008, 05:52:23 PM »
it is cute.

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Re: Critique the T-Shirt I designed.
« Reply #7 on: August 10, 2008, 09:13:09 PM »
The contrast between the happy boy and the slogan is my favorite part.  It's like when someone thinks they are about to get gomped, and then Tom tells them they aren't, but a few seconds later he does.  That kid is in those few seconds before relief and gomping.

I love it!
I'll probably go into the wee hours.

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Re: Critique the T-Shirt I designed.
« Reply #8 on: August 10, 2008, 10:08:25 PM »
The contrast between the happy boy and the slogan is my favorite part.  It's like when someone thinks they are about to get gomped, and then Tom tells them they aren't, but a few seconds later he does.  That kid is in those few seconds before relief and gomping.

On the back of the shirt, there should be a picture of the same kid sobbing uncontrollably.

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Re: Critique the T-Shirt I designed.
« Reply #9 on: August 10, 2008, 11:18:41 PM »
By the way, there'll be one or two new garments available as part of the Autumn line over at www.stereolaffs.com .

News to follow...

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Re: Critique the T-Shirt I designed.
« Reply #10 on: August 11, 2008, 12:42:38 AM »
ooooh maybe a best show hoodie?
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Re: Critique the T-Shirt I designed.
« Reply #11 on: August 11, 2008, 01:58:13 AM »
Lake Newbridge sleeping bags?

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Re: Critique the T-Shirt I designed.
« Reply #12 on: August 11, 2008, 02:25:42 AM »
By the way, there'll be one or two new garments available as part of the Autumn line over at www.stereolaffs.com .

News to follow...

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Re: Critique the T-Shirt I designed.
« Reply #13 on: August 11, 2008, 02:27:19 AM »



(tear rolls down cheek) I love you too, Orangewhip!
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Re: Critique the T-Shirt I designed.
« Reply #14 on: August 11, 2008, 07:00:12 AM »
The contrast between the happy boy and the slogan is my favorite part.  It's like when someone thinks they are about to get gomped, and then Tom tells them they aren't, but a few seconds later he does.  That kid is in those few seconds before relief and gomping.

On the back of the shirt, there should be a picture of the same kid sobbing uncontrollably.

That is perfect.
I'll probably go into the wee hours.