I didn't say my criticism was of the constructive kind, I don't know where you read that. I guess your rapping ability is as advanced as your reading comprehension skills.
I was simply stating that even if someone were to post constructive criticism, there'd probably be a swarm of nerds calling them a dipshit or a meanee
And what are you, 12? Oh no I cursed! Guys, Tom doesn't like cursing, so we're gonna be totally against cursing at all times, cause maybe then Tom will notice us and think we're cool!
But truthfully, I don't think the cursing bothered you more than the pointing out that your song was lame....
And honestly, you don't need a brain surgeon to figure out what's wrong with it, but if YOU can't figure it out on your own, I'll let you continue making them until reality sets into your head
As I stated, I respected the fact that you put time and effort into it, but I personally didn't like it. I was hoping you had done it as a joke and weren't serious, but it seems like Alvaro "The Superstar" takes his rap very VERY seriously